Saturday, January 5, 2013

nostalgic writing

This is a short writing exercise I completed shortly after moving here. It holds a lot of memories and emotions for me, so I apologize if it's over the top for my readers. It's never been evaluated or pre-read, so again, apologies.






“Look at those two fighting! And here comes one from behind and…. He’s got it!” Her laugh seemed to leap from her throat like the last shreds of sunlight bouncing between tiny ripples on the lagoon surface.
            “Oh, what a little rascal,” Graceful fingers pushed the sunbleached hair behind her ear. She looked expectantly at him, her mouth still open in a grin.
            “Yeah, they’re feisty little guys.” What an idiot, he thought. She would be gone in one short night and all he could manage to do was soak up her presence, his mind slipping into a sort of autopilot while his eyes strained to imprint the last detail.
            This wasn’t the special evening he had imagined for them. He had been stuck with the chore of the evening feeding because he had forgotten it earlier. As a result, they were pretty much stuck on the island for the night. They had done this countless times before. Tripping over the same tree trunks, stubbing toes on pesky nubs of old coral that stuck up through the packed dirt. What had become a mindless chore to him was an adventure for her, always.
            “Christ, why didn’t I slow down?” he continued in thought. Now I only have this one memory. Always impatient to finish feeding and move on to the next task, he rushed her with impatient sighs and restless shifting of weight. Even deserting her mid-laugh at times. He cringed visibly.
            “What?” she asked.
            “Just thinking,” Thinking of how much I will miss your fascination with the mundane. The mesmerizing way you can turn the ordinary into an adventure. How you can be enthralled with shore crabs fighting over pieces of putrid sardine.
            She crouched down by the waters’ edge to peek at a crab-battle that had slipped behind a rock. How can something so tiny occupy such a large part of my heart and fill such a huge portion of my mind? He wanted to touch her. His arm raised involuntarily a few inches, but he lowered it instantly. He wanted this scene to play out without his interruptions.
            Her sunkissed cheeks beamed at him.
            “Come here and look,” she pointed slyly at the crabs darting in and out of the water. With a small sigh that combined both heartache and resignation he did as she asked.
            The sun continued to slip behind the mangroves, leaving them in a still and quiet warmth. The sky turned deeper blue and the first two stars winked on.
            “Well,” she said finally, “I guess I could use some dinner,”
            “You got it,”. Suave. Simply suave. I hope she doesn’t remember what an absolute moron I was tonight. He touched her face, feeling her press the weight of her head against him.

***

            She always pushed it. It was as though the dramas that played out along the waterline cried out to be observed. As though the little crabbies would politely divvy up the scraps and wave at each other in a neighborly manner if there were no one to watch their antics.
            Tonight was different. He was absorbed in something she could almost understand, if she allowed herself to. But she wasn’t ready for that. No, she thought, not ready yet. She tore the scraps of fish into small ribbons and toyed with the tiny warriors clambering over the rocks in front of her. A lone eel poked its head from a hidey-hole to sniff at the aroma.
            “Not for you, my friend,” I can’t believe he’s letting me get away with this. I love it. She looked up at him. His eyes were so searching that it nearly frightened her.
            “Look at those two fighting! And here comes one from behind and…. He’s got it!” she laughed. He really loves me. Her stomach flipped. This was not what she had envisioned when this tall handsome man had first asked her for a drink. She had not planned on liking him so much. She had not expected that he should like her in return.
            “Oh, what a little rascal,” she said. Though whether she was speaking for the crab or the man beside her was uncertain. The water reflected his dark form like the barest whisper of a shadow. This is what it will be like when I’m gone. All I will have are the impressions of memories. Recollections of feelings.
            “Yeah, they’re feisty little guys.” She grinned down at the sand. He would never have said something like that on any normal day. A normal day and he would be halfway up the hill toward the apartments and I’d be sitting here by myself. Not that it mattered. He never mocked her childlike interests, merely left her to them. Her eyes traveled to his feet. Brown from the sun and freckled, just like the rest of him.
            She absentmindedly picked apart a cube of fish and tossed the bits to the waving claws of her tiny audience. Her heart ached and her eyes begged for release, but she wouldn’t face the fact that she had elected to leave him the next day. The thought both scared and excited her. What a man for me to have met now. Now, when I am dead set against anyone standing in the way of my crazy dreams and foolhardy ideas.
            He had stood next to her as she waded through the despair of divorce. He had held her head in his hands when she thought she could withstand no more. He had shown her the excitement of his interests. They shared the wonder of breathing underwater. She remembered with a small shake of her head how he had guided her to their first minor skirmish. How her stomach had been knotted! Bile rising in her throat, her heart pounding wildly, adrenaline coursing like jolts of lightning down her limbs. In the end the argument had been, well, relieving. His embrace just as warm afterward as it had been before. And she was leaving him.
            “What?” she asked after coming to her senses and finding him still staring at her, as though trying to interpret her like a piece of intriguing art.
“Just thinking,” he replied. Yeah, thinking of me naked. She gave a wan, one-sided smile. That was alright. He had shown her the wonders of intimacy, too. And how. She squatted down to hide her smile. Ah, I’m going to miss all this. I want to remember it all. The warmth, the humid air like a warm blanket. The sound of a hundred tiny claws clicking and clacking away. The splash of a fish, the rustle of the leaves. The smell, oh the smell of the ocean and beach. The fruit on the trees on the hillside. And my man. I’ll always remember how he did this for me.
“Come here and look,” a giggle barely concealed itself behind her request. He’d never have done this if she were staying. I wonder how far I can push this, she wondered. He obliged, not without a small sigh that almost sounded like a plea. She pointed at the armored battle before her. Please come get me, her heart cried. Tell me you need me, you want me, tell me your heart feels as empty as mine. Her mind broke in with clipped edges, arguing something about freedom and the open road. Oh shut up, she thought. The sun had gone down and she was having difficulty telling his shadow from the rest.
            “Well,” she said finally, “I guess I could use some dinner,” I’m not ready for this to end, please let it continue. If this one night could last for eternity…
“You got it,” His hand reached out for her and she smiled knowing she would never have to duck under it. Her heart cried out in agony knowing she would never feel it again in this way.

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